Friday, July 6, 2018
Elevator Pitch No. 2
A reflection I received on my last pitch: Again I say this in the most humble way, I received more compliments than constructive criticism on my first elevator pitch. I am very grateful for the encouraging comments and thought you all did great as well.
What did I change? I did notice something off myself though. I felt as if I delivered my words in a choppy manner my first go around. So, this time I tried to smooth my word delivery out. Also, I did not have a cameraman or someone to hold my script for me this video. So, I don't think filming will be as good but hopefully, the content is better.
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Hey cayman! once again I love your idea! Its a dream for busy students who suport themselves like me. I have to say the first part of the pitch did not have a lot of eye contact and it felt as though you were reading to me, the viewer and I don't need to mention the angle or vid quality because you forewarned us about that. I noticed you got more confident and comfortable in time and the video went pretty well from that point.
ReplyDeleteHey Cayman!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really great job with this pitch; I thought there was a clear and obvious improvement between your first one and this one. Like in your first video, your enthusiasm and knowledge of what you are discussing is very apparent and appreciated. I definitely agree with Melinda when she said you were more confident and comfortable, its totally true. I am really excited to see how the next one turns out. Great job!