My idea has switched a little from my original "Solving the Problem" post, but it was for the better. Enjoy and I look forward to doing business with you all! 😎
This was a really good pitch it was clear concise and the background wasn't distracting. You spoke at a great pace and your hands didn't move too much. From what I heard your idea is something a lot of college students or anyone who is too busy for a job commitment can get into. I'm very interested to hear more about the logistics of this idea.
For starters it was evident from your elevator pitch that you are clearly enthusiastic about your idea; it came through in your elevator pitch and made it very engaging. You found the right balance of saying a lot of strong information and speaking at an understandable rate; this is a hard balance to pull off, so major props to you. The concept you discussed in the pitch was quite intriguing and has a large audience of people who could benefit from it existing. I am honestly having trouble finding anything to critique, so really great job!
This definitely was a very good pitch. You made all your points clear about your idea, and that is something remarkable. Since this idea has a large number of potential customers because it is something that many busy people need is incredible. You did not move that much in your pitch and did a very good job overall. Congratulations!
This was a really good pitch it was clear concise and the background wasn't distracting. You spoke at a great pace and your hands didn't move too much. From what I heard your idea is something a lot of college students or anyone who is too busy for a job commitment can get into. I'm very interested to hear more about the logistics of this idea.
ReplyDeleteHey Cayman!
ReplyDeleteFor starters it was evident from your elevator pitch that you are clearly enthusiastic about your idea; it came through in your elevator pitch and made it very engaging. You found the right balance of saying a lot of strong information and speaking at an understandable rate; this is a hard balance to pull off, so major props to you. The concept you discussed in the pitch was quite intriguing and has a large audience of people who could benefit from it existing. I am honestly having trouble finding anything to critique, so really great job!
Hey Cayman,
ReplyDeleteThis definitely was a very good pitch. You made all your points clear about your idea, and that is something remarkable. Since this idea has a large number of potential customers because it is something that many busy people need is incredible. You did not move that much in your pitch and did a very good job overall. Congratulations!